Seconding all of what >>9783313
said. In more detail, from top to bottom:>>9783272
Grey wig doesn’t suit the coord, black would be better. There’s no purple or black head accessories to balance the heavy dark colors of the dress, and the blue head bow is wrong color. The bear ears are kitschy but fine. Boobloaf, but not the worst I’ve ever seen. Purse and shoes technically match the dress but they don’t look good or balanced and again there’s no purple anywhere else substantial.
All said a messy coord but does generally look lolita, just not good lolita.>>9783279
Lacy frilly brim on the hat that doesn’t go with the rest of the toned down outfit. The necklace kind of sticks out awkwardly although she was trying for pink balance its kind of the wrong colour. The glasses aren’t that cute. The blouse is a tshirt with no structure, no decor or frills or details to look at, nor is it pretty and flowy if she wanted a less textured top. The waistband looks unpleasant, and the proof of the skirt seems a little saggy (look at the side she isn’t holding up)
Personal preference, I find it unfortunate she spent money on brand bracelets that don’t quite fit the outfit but then can’t be bothered with a decent top. Even an offbrand cutsew with a thematically appropriate print on it would look better.
To me they’re both borderline. Not fully ita but beyond a small nitpick