oh boy where do i start
1. tiny top hats = super ita. especially with the anime girl on it- makes it look like those pictures of disney princesses on the official disney dresses
2. the material the dress is made of looks really low quality- the shiny fabric does NOT work with the matte fabrics of the blouse and clip on thing
3. the clip on thing! the color is much too saturated. if it was the same color as the blouse it'd look good, but as it is it looks very ita.
4. the bow around the collar looks ridiculous. if it were a ribbon like the ones on the clip on thing, it would tie the outfit together nicely.
5. the face makeup... no. the arm looks very good, but the face is not working. plus the expression makes her look constipated.
6. the colors. keep the pink- it looks very cute- but change the dress from yellow to brown or gray, keep the blue out of the coord, change the wig and shoes, get rid of the bracelet, and add some more steampunk details, like goggles or large gears. oh, and try not to pull an expression that makes it look like your dog just shat in your white designer handbag.