Too much low end, sample too way too loud (also kinda lame), cool sounds>>80249333
tone back the snare reverb so it's more in the background and.... echo like (pre delay)
that sample got old halfway through the first section. otherwise chill beat man>>80255445
drumming in the first slower part of sfgh was questionable... actually during the powerchord riff parts too. i think those would be more interesting if you slowed them down actually
and you uploaded the same song twice...
gdfwhatever was definitely cooler. when you repeated yourself in the third section it just killed the momentum of the song
don't link your profile next time. also dial your tones in better lmao. too fuckin noisey>>80261412
why is this so fucking scooped?
what are you doing to the instruments? sounds trashed dude
also the last chord sequence at 1:16 sounds like the second chord is supposed to be like that one from the middle of trio and group dancers by charles mingus.... i think it's just a diminished chord but maybe you could get fancier with it. actually that whole album might interest you if you like those kind of progressions>>80261932
just keep working at it honestly. it's obvious your new, this doesn't come across as very industrial>>80262370
is this a joke sammy?
i don't hear anything special. back then i'm pretty sure it was room tone and or plates. springs were obviously a thing but that's not that sound >>80263040
the guitars have that sharp tone again here
your vocal take is fine imo. idk if you fucked the guitar recording up or if it's something you did to it but that's probably the biggest thing... and you know the usual stuff but we won't get into that.